writing this week

                          

We have been learning about narratives.
a narritive has an opening,build-up,problem, solution and conclusion and it has to have the setting characters and time preferably.
this is my story mountain:

this is a bit of the narrative i wrote

 Deep in the wood a dark night. i was walking down the bracken strewn path as i walked i started to see stone huts i was in the kingdom of vendral the dark king. my dog raffy walked beside me i told him to stay quiet cause if he barked the whole oparation would be blown. the shadow of the castle fell over me 

i dodged behnd a tree and crept towards the castle of doom. the evil king vendral,s minions,golllllems,one or two giants all patroled round the castle king vendrals wife vander the witch was in the lookout tower. i signaled to my friend spies toby and jake we all climed up trees and i carried raffy. suddenly the tree shook i almost let go of raffy it shook again it was a trap one of the minions threw a fireball at the tree it caught on fire!!!

two more minions threw fireballs at jake and toby,s tree they caught fire to the golllllems surrounded the tree at the bottom luckely they couldent climb. 

the fire had gone half way up the tree but just then every tree in the entire forest shook toby jake and i all fell and all went blank.

.i really enjoyed writting the narritives 
.we have also been doing story bird where you create picture books out of selected pictureshttps://storybird.com/