proulouge
Deep in the wood on a dark night. i was creeping down the bracken strewn path as i crept i started to see stone huts i was in the kingdom of vendral the dark king. my dog raffy walked beside me i told him to stay quiet cause if he barked the whole oparation would be blown. the shadow of the castle fell over me.
i dodged behnd a tree and crept towards the castle of doom. the evil king vendral,s minions,golllllems,one or two giants all patroled round the castle king vendrals wife vander the witch was in the lookout tower. i signaled to my friend spies toby and jake we all climed up trees and i carried raffy. suddenly the tree shook i almost let go of raffy it shook again it was a trap one of the minions saw us threw a fireball at the tree it caught on fire!!!
two more minions threw fireballs at jake and toby,s tree they caught fire to the golllllems surrounded the tree at the bottom luckely they couldent climb.
the fire had gone half way up the tree but just then every tree in the entire forest shook toby jake and i all fell and all went blank.
Chapter1:escape
i woke up next to jake and toby i was in a stone room ivy clung to the walls. we had been imprisined like so many others in the dungens of vendrals castle we had to escape and find the bronze book which held all of vendrals deepest secrets.
we need a plan to escape said toby. ive got an idea i said when the dungen crawler comes to give us food we ambush him then sneak out and use the spades that was used to feed the hungry mouths by the dungen crawler to tunnel out. good idea said jake
when they heard the dungen crawler crawling down the passage outside they hid. the door creaked open and slowly came in the dungen crawler with a plate of old bread and cheese
then toby jake and i pounced knocking the dreadful thing out we crept out there was a small torch on the wall but infront of that was three spades we grabbed them and sped up the passage until we were near the trapdoor that led out three golllllems stood gaurding it we retreated went into an empty cell and started digging
three hours later we hit a lower tree root and dug upwards beside the tree. finnaly we were out of that dreadful place i could see vendrals kingdom in the distance they returned back to there little hut on the outskirts of the forest
as one of the good king colic's spies they had to be close to the forest so that they could tell king colic if vandral was planning an attack on colic's kingdom. i think we should have a sleep said toby. yeah i said i lay down thinking about the escape. wwwwwwwaaaoooooorrrrnnnnn i woke up vendrals army was approaching he was attacking our kingdom.
Chapter2:RRRUUUNNN
Uh oh RRRUUUNNN I said we bolted out the door we mounted our horses and galloped of into the kingdom "sire king colic vendral he's attacking" I was in king colic's royal chamber "what!" he said "vendrals attacking!" yes i said back "servants prepare our soildors wizards dragons and horses all of them with armour on" the king said "rex toby and jake i think this would be a perfect time to steal the bronze book" he said (rex was my name by the way) the bronze book said toby oh yeah it would i suppose cause all the people and monsters there would be fighting you said jake "well what are you waiting for go" said king colic "servants get these lads some supplys quick!"
10 MINUTES LATER NEAR THE FOREST BEHIND VENDRALS ARMY
fewf we got past them said jake come on lets go i said we adventured into the forest at once everything darkened. we stayed alert and crept onwards soon we reached the castle vander was standing at the lookout tower vendral had known that king colic would try to send spies well he was at war cause there was also a few minions left behind gaurding the castle "rex' i heard toby say we need to sneak in quietly ok. he was meaning raffy we found the tree that we had dug before and went down the long tunnel to the dungeons luckily there were no guards. We snuck out the entrance and proceeded into the castle itself. We passed two or three rooms on the way.
King colic had given them a map of the castle from when one of his servants had worked in before as evil but had changed good and given the map
We need to go right then down that hallway then up 6 sets of stairs then turn left then another left to king vendrals and queen vanders bedroom a while later after lots of close calls getting caught we reached the bedroom. Look for a bronze book I said but then we heard footsteps hide said toby we all sped under the bed I grabbed the bronze book just in time as vander the witch came in.
Chapter 3: UH OH
Uh oh jake whispered shut up Toby and I shouted vander spun around and looked under the bed she gave an evil cackle. And said I thought you three would be here wi'll vendral was attacking king colic's castle you three were snooping around up here for what? nobody answered she raised her hand preparing to launch an evil spell at them tell me. her rasping voice spat out the words. We were just looking said jake looking for what! she said fine then we were trying to free all the prisoners I said lying I had to be carefull not to tell her about the bronze book which I had grabbed from the draw of the bedside table and was in my pocket. "Your lying" she said "I can tell you are" I silently signalled to jake and toby to attack when I said now "that means your going to die" she said "NOW" I shouted we attacked from all sides but for she was a witch we couldent hold her off for long. I lunged towards her from the front toby from the back and jake from the side. Then we all ran out of vendral and vander's room.
soon we reached the second floor some golllllems had been alerted and were lumbering slowly behind getting further and further away but as I rounded a corner one of the golllllems used there immense strength to throw a rock at me it narrowly missed me and hit jake and toby they cried out in pain stumbling across the floor. I ran to them they were only minorly hurt just a bit dazed we kept on running but at a slower pace the golllllems were starting to catch up.
We reached the big obsidian door Which was slightly ajar we slinked out of it and out into the forest not knowing that we had just awoken the thing a highly dangerous monster that protected the bronze book and hunted down whoever stole it. Let's go said toby the golllllems will catch up but they don't know that we stole the bronze book I said. Soon we heard the sound of hard battling I knew that we must be winning with our dragons. but I could never be certain as I entered the battle field I instantly got attacked I un-sheathed my sword and met his blade twisted it round and bought it to his throat cutting his head of jake and toby were behind me. we rushed towards a golllllem who swing at us with one massive stone arm toby jake and I all bought our swords down on the arm and cut it of purple bloods poured from it as the golllllem retreated.
Chapter 4: battle
I hurried to the castle and found king colic on the battlements shooting at minions with his golden bow king colic sire we got the bronze book "good" he said follow me to the stronghold we'll have a look later I went deeper and deeper into the strong hold until we reached a diamond door king colic pulled out a diamond key from his pocket which he. Placed in the keyhole in the room was a blue silk cushion I put the bronze book on it then king colic locked the door and we went back out into the maddening battle I hopped on my dragon that king colic had given me it spurted flames from his mouth which were met by the minions fireballs flame my dragon let out another spurt of flame killing about six minions vendral had wiped out most of our soldiers and a few wizards but we were winning soon vendral retreated leaving the bloody mass of death on the battlefield but their was just one problem were was raffy he had been with me since when we had gone out of the diamond room.
Jake toby king colic and I all went to the room where the bronze book lay king colic opened the door. but the bronze book wasn't there instead there was raffy with a few scraps of bronze book covering infront of him raffy I shouted you ate the bronze book he whimpered at me.
OH NO said jake. wait look at this how could he chew through bronze it's leather said toby."That
means it's a fake" said king colic fewf I said well we need to find the proper one said toby
"toby" said king colic "its going to be very hard to find the proper bronze book you may have awaken the thing when you took the fake"
the thing whats that i said "an ancient monster that vendral set to gaurd the bronze book"he said
"blimey this is going to be hard" king colic said
to be continued
its good to see the finished copy
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